Creative writing
Short story - Lt. Col. P.A.D. Albert:
Serenity of true love
Two or three women at a time would come to help my mother during the
processing of paddy before hulling it.
Two
damsels wearing jackets and clothes who were robust and experienced
enough to climb the ladder to reach the barn did remove paddy in sacks
and emptied them into the copper caldrons which were ready on the
hearths. Heavy logs were used to kindle the fire, as it needed constant
heat for boiling.
Long mats were unrolled in the backyard to spread the boiled and
steaming paddy. I watched how my mother was squatting on the mat
tiresomely, to spread the paddy rolling under her fingers to be dried in
the hot sun; also how she used to get up early in the morning to prepare
'Kiribath' and 'Seeni Sambol' for the working team for breakfast. She
did all this by herself to keep the fire burning. She blew and blew
through her mouth to kindle and maintain the home fire.
Although we had a five acre coconut land and about six acres of
paddy, my father never made any attempt to develop them by way of any
means. I couldn't understand as to why he was so lethargic at times.
He never manured the coconut trees and even the under growth was
cleared very rarely. Hence the income from coconut was very low. My
mother made her pocket money by selling cashew nuts, pepper, goraka and
coffee which were grown in the garden. Sometimes she sold rice too. She
spent a part of it for my education.
Both of them hailed from two respectable families of the area, and
the villagers looked upto them with respect and honour.
The ancestral property that we inherited was not protected by a
fence. Instead, there had been a deep cut trench right round the land
which was legally accepted and gone into its deeds as boundaries to
demarcate its extent.
My mother never grumbled for comfort, nor did she demand any
extravagant things from my father. No doubt, that both of them had led
comfortable lives during their childhood. Being seated on my mothers
lap, I used to listen to their stories which captured my mind of the
glory of their parental deeds.
I used to sit on the cement floor of the verandah near the two tall
columns that bore the weight of the last beam along the front elevation
of the heavy super structure of our century old house.
When my mother needed rest after her days work she too used to sit
there on a mat either, darning some clothes or repairing my English
dictionary. I was just ten years old. My father used to prepare his
betel tray, by husking an arecanut while chewing one mouthful of betel,
seated on his easy antique chair with the spittoon by his side.
It was really interesting to watch how her fingers could control the
needle that pricked the seams of the loosened pages to bring them
together into a single binding. I still could remember her innocent face
swiftly moving up to tell my father about my school fees of that
particular month.
"Are we able to make it this week?" Not that she didn't know the
financial situation of our home, but it was how she used to break the
ice. My father in his fifties was just two years elder to my mother and
possessed a moderately built physic.
I had never seen him getting angry. He would mind his own business
without giving trouble to others. He was not a hard worker.
We got our income mainly from paddy and coconuts. It was nearly
fourteen years after, World War the second. Some dealers from our
village used to collect paddy from us at a wholesale price and after
processing them into rice would transport it by carts to,
"Thotalanga" or
"Mariyakade" in Colombo, for sale.
"Why didn't Magilin come this week? She owes us a balance of ninety two
rupees.
Didn't she?" said my father.
"True, but I have bought a hand bag from her that day for which I have
to pay her twenty rupees," replied the mother.
"When will be the wedding of Udahagedara Podimenike?" My father
inquired.
"I remember. It will be on 22nd of this month. Only twelve days more."
"How are we going to find money for all these? Anyway, what are the
things we need to buy?" he exclaimed.
"There is nothing much," said my mother, "but I think at least you need
to buy a shirt". "I haven't bought a saree since last year. This child's
shoes are worn out," she reciprocated.
"Alright. Then, shall we ask for an advance of one hundred and fifty
rupees from Magilin. She can take the paddy after the harvest. Can't
she?" so saying, he raised the spittoon towards his mouth.
"That would be better," I'll send a message for her to come." My
mother replied eagerly.
My mother treated her elder brother with much pride and priase,
because he was an English educated person married to a rich lady, and
was dwelling in Colombo. I could see his made up look of a proud young
man, beside a lady wearing a western veil, in their wedding photograph.
However, it was strange and unpleasant to me when comparing that with
the natural and pleasant look of my father and the simple and kind look
of my mother, in their wedding photograph.
It was a busy day for my mother. She started replacing all curtains
with the new ones, which were designed with expensive lace. It was a set
that comes out only on special occasions from her wardrobe.
I knew that people from Colombo were planning to visit us. She did
everything possible alone; arranging the interior decor, cleaning the
floor, removing cobwebs, sweeping and throwing away clutter; putting on
new coverlets, dusting the old furniture to shine and so on. My father
never had the courtesy to help her.
I was not allowed to do anything but to be seated and watch. Having
finished the proper house keeping, my mother laid the table with
short-eats that she made the previous day. An expensive tea set was laid
on the table, as well.
Then she ran to the well for a body wash and got herself dressed with
a long sleeved jacket and a saree. My father put on a shirt and a sarong
and lighted a cigar which he had bought from an Indian seller who used
to come to my village.
They were seasonal merchants. then he occupied his usual place - the
easy chair, looking at the hedges, deep into it's dark curves grown half
way with creepers down from the top of the arecanut groove. His
character was such that he never divulged anything that he had in his
mind to anyone. He was like still water.
I hated the arrival of the people from Colombo because I felt I would
become a stranger before them. They would converse in English. Most of
the time when they stayed in our house we felt as if we were in a
foreign country.
Why couldn't they be natural with us? My mother couldn't understand
their behaviour, because of her blind faith that she had towards her
brother. I was wondering as to why this man from Colombo looked down
upon his own sister by exhibiting his pomp and arrogance along with his
westernized children. Was it mainly because of his superiority complex?
My father was really embarrassed and very rarely did he look straight
at his brother-in-law's eyes. His timidity was a shame, but I myself
couldn't do anything to uphold the dignity of my parents, but went on
hating them in my mind.
"Amma why do they always talk in English?" I asked my mother.
"Putha you can't understand it. They are big people from Colombo" was
my mother's answer. "You too much study English to be a big man".
Big brother
During the wartime, when most of the people in Colombo were eating
'bajiri' as there was a scarcity of rice, the "big" brother of my mother
used to send a note by post prior to his arrival for the collection of
rice. He never did apply the normal ethics in addressing them.
Later, I realized how the big brother, the 'kalu sudda', appeared to
be so big to our simple family.
It was a pathetic scene for me to watch how my mother peeled cashew
taken away from the 'atuwa', to be mixed with kitul honey and served as
a special treat for them, despite her fingers getting discoloured due to
the fluid of those nuts.
No sooner they entered our house than, they came out with their first
complaint, that their car got stuck in rugged muddy puddle in the middle
of the village road. However, it was the real truth. The villagers
including us never had a good leadership to improve our roads.
Soon after the New Year day celebrations, my mother called for two
women who were proficient in cooking oil cakes, such as 'kokis', 'kevum'
and 'asmee'. Also she never forgot to prepare "kadju aluwa", because her
big brother's children were very fond of them.
All those were packed in two rattan boxes along with bananas, and
kept aside in the pantry. When the day was up, we got up early in the
morning and got ready to set out on our journey to Colombo. My father
didn't let my mother down at any cost. In need, he was like her shadow.
It inspired us very much.
My father wore the brown tweed cloth over the white sarong. The
silver chain would be long enough to cover seven rounds, around his
waist. He put on the coat of the same texture over the white closed
collar shirt.
His hair knot was perfectly arranged. The brown pair of pumps which
he had worn on his wedding day had still been seen new. He looked very
smart in his attire. My mother, in her room, was still at her dressing
table. She was dressed in an expensive silk saree, and a long sleeved
jacket designed with white lace.
A golden necklace of which the pendant was gem studded, was seen
around her neck. The golden bangles on the right hand jingled to a tune
when she was taking her hand bag from the top shelf of her wardrobe.
She turned round and round before the mirror to check whether her
dress was befitting. Her gold colour low heel slippers would match with
her light gold saree and when she came out of her room she looked very
attractive and beautiful but simple in nature.
I was just seated on a chair nearby because I was the first one to be
dressed by my mother, with the ash colour tweed shorts and white short
sleeved shirt. I had to wear socks and shoes which I was always
reluctant. She put some oil on my head and with a small massage she
combed it holding my chin with her left hand. It was soothing when she
did so.
Mother like a queen
'Baron Ayya', as my father used to address him, the owner of the old
Austin-12, the car with a folding hood and two big mud guards on either
side, two big silver colour head lamps fixed to a silver cross bar and
an air born with a rubber ball fixed on the right hand side door frame
near the steering wheel, was a well experienced driver.
When it was motoring down the hill reaching our compound, tooting its
horn, pop-pop, I was thrilled and overwhelmed with happiness.
My mother like a queen got in and occupied the rear seat and kept me
by her side, and my father, the front seat. 'Baron Ayya' having packed
the boxes of sweet meat on the rack behind the car and tied them
together on to it, came in front, went on turning round and round the
crank, faster and faster to put the engine into motion.
When the vehicle was ascending the hill with its soaring sound, I
looked at my mother and in turn she gave me a sweet smile and I loved to
see her beautiful face glimmering in happiness, which was a very rare
sight in my life.
Two decades had passed. My mother was still blowing the hearth,
morning and evening to kindle the fire. My father was always seen on his
easy chair dreaming something unknown to us or puffing smoke of a cigar
lest the time he spent was picking some coconuts or tethering the cow
for grazing or chasing away some brats who crept into our garden for
some firewood.
Day by day our financial situation was deteriorating. The income from
paddy became less and less due to the negligence of the tenants. Trips
initiated by my mother to Colombo were curtailed. Her Colombo brother's
children grew up and achieved higher status professionally and socially
in the town. As such, their visits to see my mother were suspended and
the communication with them ceased to exist.
It was a dim and dry day. I saw my mother trying to read the daily
paper. She turned around and told me that her eyes were paining. I
suggested her to go and see a doctor.
In fact, I told her that I would accompany her to a specialist, but
she with the advice of an elderly neighbour used to get treatment from a
'vedamahathmaya' for a considerable period. Later she found that her eye
sight was becoming weaker and weaker.
Once I could remember my mother was admitted to the Colombo General
Hospital when I was small, for which I didn't know what the cause was.
But later, I came to know that it was some illness with regard to her
pregnancy. She had great hopes for a baby to be her daughter which she
couldn't get fulfilled for the past ten years. It so happened that her
expectation became a tragedy when that child was still born. I visited
her in the hospital several times with my father, just like a thread of
a needle.
Before going out of home, my father used to double check the locks of
the doors and the windows and I had realised, when he was keeping the
first step out of home, that he had a certain spiritual thought roaming
in his mind.
The packet of meals for my mother was in a bag along with some
clothes of my mother, washed and dried the previous day. The rice and
curry was cooked by the old lady next door.
I felt very sad for she could not get a good meal as she expected. -
"How can I eat 'kan-kun' every day," she remarked. It was lately that I
realised that the poor concern of my father towards my mother was not
because that he didn't love her but because his knowledge of home
management was poor due to his ignorance in the absence of my mother.
Travelling by train
That day, we waited for more than an hour at the hospital gate,
because we were able to travel by an early train to Colombo. I loved
travelling in a corner seat of the train pulled by the locomotive engine
and also to travel by tram cars. The time spent there was years to me, I
think I was then eleven years old, I was dumb and blind to most of those
happenings.
All of a sudden I saw a coffin being taken into a hearse parked
nearby. I felt as if my mother were taken in it, but I didn't dare to
ask anything from my father. I felt as if the whole world was crumbling
upon me. I sobbed in my heart, I was pressed with sad feelings. I had no
one to tell them. The bell rang.
The whole crowd thronged in, but my father was the last to follow.
After passing the long passage we were just entering the ward and at a
distance, I saw my mother lying in a bed.
Although I was tempted to run to her and embrace her, my feet did not
allow me to do so. My eyes filled with tears. Now, I reach her bed. She
holds my hand lightly. Her eyes meet with mine, I see them crying.
I feel like keeping my head in her bosom. She asks me whether I had
my meals. I am dumb. She gives me some grapes - sweet green seedless
grapes. I keep them in my pocket. I am helpless to talk. There are many
things to tell her; in my mind; I can't sleep alone in the night; I am
afraid; no one is there to talk with me; I can't go home; I can't eat
without you; please do take me to you or else come home, but I am dumb.
A tall English Mother who is in charge of the ward sees me. She comes
to me smilingly and offers me some grapes and caresses my head and goes
away stalking with dignity. My mother takes the packet of rice opens it
and she takes hardly a morsel and looks away desperately.
All of a sudden I see her brother in Colombo stepping towards us. The
tough heels of his Johnwite shoes give a rhythmic tapping when he walks
swiftly. He brings a tiffin carrier and keeps it on the bedside
cupboard. He takes out dishes one after the other and places them on the
table. I seer some slices of see fish with white sauce, a mixed
vegetable salad, dhal curry and a boiled egg.
I felt like eating one slice of fish - a natural temptation. Also
there were some ripe bananas. Amidst the crowd, my mother didn't want to
eat, and my father looked indifferent and felt inferior, I suppose,
before his brother in law's pomp and pageantry on his single visit
during the whole period of my mother's stay in hospital.
It was time for us to leave her. My mother took me closer to her. I
couldn't open my eyes. Those were full of tears. She pressed me to her
bosom. I couldn't wait any more being suppressed with my feelings,
through fear. She kissed me and I felt faintish, I sobbed; I cried.
When we reached home, it was dark. There was some bread at home. I
ate some slices with plantains and drank two cups of water. I was really
thirsty and fatigued. I changed my clothes; answered a call of nature
and did a body wash. I couldn't find the towel for me to wipe my body.
I wiped it with my sarong, jumped into my mother's bed and hid my
face among the pillows. I smelled her life within. I felt she was with
me. Without any knowledge, I went to my dream world, with her. When I
got up next day, it was day light. I came to the outer verandah, I saw
my father chasing behind stray cattle in the garden.
Having come round, my mother was brought back home in Baron Ayya's
car. I jumped up and cried through happiness. I ran to my mates nearby
and told them that she had come back home. We played in the garden as
usual.
After another year or so, she gave birth to a baby girl. She became
my only sister for me to have company. Years passed by, one day my
mother complained that her left eye was blurring and paining.
Immediately, I took a day's leave and took her to a specialist doctor.
After the medical examination, he informed us that she was suffering
from glaucoma and that it couldn't be cured surgically but with constant
medical treatment, the current state could be maintained.
However, several years later, the medical report revealed that her
right eye too was attacked by the same disease.
The doomsday
This terrible news created a very unpleasant atmosphere in our home.
I could realize the painful feeling of my mother from the very depth of
my heart.
My father never uttered a word but munched the news and got it
digested in his soul. We knew that we were nearing the door step of a
very bad period. As we expected, the doomsday came. My mother called me
to her side, she held my hand tightly and tried to utter something but
failed due to her grief and she muttered "Putha, I can't see anything
now, I am totally blind."
An unbearable shock ran through the sinews of my heart. It quivered
in my whole body. I felt I would be sinking in an abyss. Gaining my
strength, I pleaded with her, "Amma please try to bear up your pain, you
are my saviour, I love you very much, we will take care of you Amma!".
"What is my life without eyes" she uttered in a diminishing tone. I
called my wife and the sister. They could understand the situation. I
came out of her room; walked through the back yard and trod along the
foot path up to the lonely garden of hedges left for forestry.
I could see only the sky above and the earth below me. There were no
one else for my comfort, I murmured to myself and scene after scene my
memory started to shatter like a dead generium. But they were recalled
to a meaningful flash back and it reverberated the true core of her life
which was dedicated to my life, to make me a man. I could not hold back
any more, my throbbing feeling which broke out to a gushing cataract of
cries with tears rolling down my cheeks. She could foresee my life. She
was very much sensible and critical on controversy.
Her decisions were accurate. She practised the dhamma in the right
manner. She observed the five precepts.
She declared that what was to be given to their children as
inheritance should be given in equity, and be awarded as gifts before
their death, and she did so. She decided that I should be sent to an
English school when I was six years old, and it was carried out. She
treated my wife as her own daughter. We were in harmony all the time.
But why this horrible thing happened to her?
Time went on and initially my mother went off her head due to
hallucination. The doctor told me that it was natural for one who had a
good eye sight before to be depressed, if one would lose it completely.
After a considerable period of time, she recovered from depression and
led a normal life but, we never could bring back the kind of happiness
that she had enjoyed earlier.
I was given a transfer to Badulla, I could come home only once a
month. My sister had to undergo much trouble in her life. My wife had to
look after her three children. We couldn't see any silver line of
happiness in our dark clouds of life. I started reading dhamma books to
pacify myself.
One morning I received a call from a cousin of mine. He asked me not
to get excited but to come home immediately. When I entered my home I
saw my father seated in his usual chair pulled up and gazing at the
wilderness. His white hair, white shirt, white sarong and the innocent
tearful eyes made me mad, made me white and made me faintish.
An ornament
I knelt before my mother's coffin and worshipped her as if I were
worshipping the Great One, and it came to my memory like a hymn -
"Forty eight years ago, you took me in your palms and fed me to grow.
You placed me down and allowed me to walk. You gave me life and strength
to talk, you gave me vision and showed me the right path."
Soon after my mother's death, father fell ill. He rejected taking
meals, and consumed only liquids. In the third month he too passed away.
Apart from the two pillows of his death bed, we found an Indian shawl
under his second pillow. It was the shawl that my mother had preserved
like an ornament in her wardrobe.
How it had come over there was the secret of their true love,
treasured in their hearts which we did not see with our mortal eyes.
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